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Saturday, 15 October 2011

Haiku ( a form of Japanese poetry,very short poems.)

Lament

Bleak moon, biting wind
Sending shivers all around
She waited, night long

5-7-5 syllabic form
( a modern English haiku)
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7 comments:

  1. Nishebh16 October 2011 at 00:57

    lovely! :)

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  2. Anonymous17 October 2011 at 11:01

    yes...this is lovely....

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  3. Yashomana Choudhury17 October 2011 at 12:06

    Thank you :)

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  4. Mõrämê€18 October 2011 at 02:14

    very nice

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  5. mrinal.max.saikia18 October 2011 at 22:55

    Real gud..
    She's waiting for night to end, or waiting for beter 2mrw, or 4 hr lov or 4 jst d moment 2 pass, or is thr sm othr thng dat i cudnt grasp..
    Kip Ur pen scribling.
    God bls.

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  6. Yashomana Choudhury18 October 2011 at 23:26

    Thank you!!

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  7. Shashidhar Sharma7 August 2012 at 00:17

    Great work I like it so much... Thanks for sharing.

    I wrote an article about haiku, have a look. http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.in/2012/07/feature-understanding-haiku-beginners.html

    Shashi
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